CAUSES of GLOBAL MIGRATION
Migration which means movement of
people from one place to another has been
during human
history.To place where is gone ,there are two kinds of
migration;internal migration and global migration.Thanks to
technology,global migration is common today's
world.Because technological
improvements have made global migration easer.There are two
basic reasons why people migrate
intercontinental.These are economic and socail questions.
One reason of global migration is
economic.People who are educated and want better life conditions can
migrate to other countries which provide to emigrants better working
conditions.
Industrialized countries pay high salary for the educated, afford
them good working opportunity and more technology.This type of
migration is seen mostly undeveloped or underdeveloped countries,such
as Indian,Pakistan,Algeria,Tunisia.However,this situaiton can cause
some troubles for these countries.For instance, they lose their
specialized clerks, such as doctors, engineers, economist and
artificer. While their development slows down because of population
overspill,developed countries ,like America, redouble their power
.For this reason,global migrations must be limited by governments and
people who consider to move must be encouraged to work for their own
country's benefit.
Another reason of global migration
is socail affairs,such as war,natural boundary
changes,starvation,drought and
epidemic disease.People who suffer from natural disasters and wars
migrate another regions by abandoning their domicile.But migrations
can result in different issues in some cases. For example; three
years ago a civil war started in Syria and thousands of Syrian
citizens had to immigrate to Turkey.On the other hand,this event
effected Turkish people in a bad way both economically and
socially.Social structure broke down in Turkey because of this dense
wave of immigration. Because The Turkish Government spent a lot
of money for Syrian People by ignoring its own citizen.House
rent,food prices and theft events increased.Turkish People started to
feel uncomfortable themselves. So cultural differences,hostility and
socail conflicts begun between Turkish and Syrian People.
Both emigrants and people living in
districts where is moved have to difficulties to
adopt to each other.As a result,
race riot can happen.This means world will has to face a new
global problems.Unless governments
improve life conditions for their citizens and narrow the
move,migration will be an important
point for humanity and world
TS: Becoming widespread global
migration has two major reasons:economic and social
affairs.
SP1: The educated living in
the poor countries migrate to developed countries for
good life
conditions.
DEV:Developed countries
provide to fine workman more money and high standard
of life.
DEV: It is disadvantage that
poor countries' educated citizens to move another
country.
SP2: People who
subject to socail problems in their own regions migrate
DEV:How
do the emigrants effect the areas they go
DEV:Global
migration can cause confliction between people who have different
culture
1-) The style you used when you wrote your essay is unacceptable
YanıtlaSil2-) To place where is gone(?) ,there are two kinds of migration;(punctuation)internal migration and global migration.
3-) Because technological improvements have made global migration easer.(spelling)
1) CAUSES of GLOBAL MIGRATION, Turkish People ---> Capitalization
YanıtlaSil2) For example; (punctuation) three years ago a civil war started in Syria and thousands of Syrian citizens had to immigrate to Turkey.
3) On the other hand,this event effected (wrong word / spelling) Turkish people in a bad way both economically and socially.
4) Because The Turkish Government spent a lot of money for Syrian People by ignoring its own citizen. 5) So cultural differences,hostility and socail conflicts begun between Turkish and Syrian People. ---> You shouldn't use "because and so" like that.