14 Nisan 2014 Pazartesi

CAUSES of GLOBAL MIGRATION

     Migration which means movement of people from one place to another has been
during human history.To place where is gone ,there are two kinds of migration;internal migration and global migration.Thanks to technology,global migration is common today's
world.Because technological improvements have made global migration easer.There are two
basic reasons why people migrate intercontinental.These are economic and socail questions.

     One reason of global migration is economic.People who are educated and want better life conditions can migrate to other countries which provide to emigrants better working
conditions. Industrialized countries pay high salary for the educated, afford them good working opportunity and more technology.This type of migration is seen mostly undeveloped or underdeveloped countries,such as Indian,Pakistan,Algeria,Tunisia.However,this situaiton can cause some troubles for these countries.For instance, they lose their specialized clerks, such as doctors, engineers, economist and artificer. While their development slows down because of population overspill,developed countries ,like America, redouble their power .For this reason,global migrations must be limited by governments and people who consider to move must be encouraged to work for their own country's benefit.

     Another reason of global migration is socail affairs,such as war,natural boundary
changes,starvation,drought and epidemic disease.People who suffer from natural disasters and wars migrate another regions by abandoning their domicile.But migrations can result in different issues in some cases. For example; three years ago a civil war started in Syria and thousands of Syrian citizens had to immigrate to Turkey.On the other hand,this event effected Turkish people in a bad way both economically and socially.Social structure broke down in Turkey because of this dense wave of immigration. Because The Turkish Government spent a lot of money for Syrian People by ignoring its own citizen.House rent,food prices and theft events increased.Turkish People started to feel uncomfortable themselves. So cultural differences,hostility and socail conflicts begun between Turkish and Syrian People.

     Both emigrants and people living in districts where is moved have to difficulties to
adopt to each other.As a result, race riot can happen.This means world will has to face a new
global problems.Unless governments improve life conditions for their citizens and narrow the
move,migration will be an important point for humanity and world


TS: Becoming widespread global migration has two major reasons:economic and social affairs.

SP1: The educated living in the poor countries migrate to developed countries for
good life conditions.
DEV:Developed countries provide to fine workman more money and high standard
of life.
DEV: It is disadvantage that poor countries' educated citizens to move another
country.
SP2: People who subject to socail problems in their own regions migrate

DEV:How do the emigrants effect the areas they go
DEV:Global migration can cause confliction between people who have different

culture 

2 yorum:

  1. 1-) The style you used when you wrote your essay is unacceptable

    2-) To place where is gone(?) ,there are two kinds of migration;(punctuation)internal migration and global migration.

    3-) Because technological improvements have made global migration easer.(spelling)

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  2. 1) CAUSES of GLOBAL MIGRATION, Turkish People ---> Capitalization
    2) For example; (punctuation) three years ago a civil war started in Syria and thousands of Syrian citizens had to immigrate to Turkey.
    3) On the other hand,this event effected (wrong word / spelling) Turkish people in a bad way both economically and socially.
    4) Because The Turkish Government spent a lot of money for Syrian People by ignoring its own citizen. 5) So cultural differences,hostility and socail conflicts begun between Turkish and Syrian People. ---> You shouldn't use "because and so" like that.

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